Tiny drops of stormy skies
Fall fast against my windowsill
A small smile falls into place
My fingers dance along
The chipped wood and paint
As though a piano
My mind lost in the melody
And the rhythm of a
This was written for @Dversepoets Poetry Prompt about weather
It was written while listening to Minuet I by Johann S. Bach. I encourage you to listen to the piece to understand the mood.
i love listening to Bach and his works often remind me of rain. what a great idea to match words with a particular song. this is such a lovely piece. i feel its rhythm.
Thank-you! 🙂 I love writing about weather so this was my favorite challenge yet
You might like my “Ivory at Midnight” poem. It’s direct link is on my Poetry page (navigation bar) I’d love to know what you think of that one
oh my i am not good at this. i can’t find Ivory at Midnight! which month was it posted in?
It looks like May 1st 🙂
and thank you for following my posts. I will follow your lovely blog as well. ~jane
oh i can so relate to this one….def love the sound of rain…i would be -bop along to it…so soothing…
I absolutely love the sound of rain 🙂
rhythm of the rain…. so soothing!
oh i’d play along the rain any time…what a concert..
This is lovely, I’ve read only two of your posts so far and I think that music means a lot to you …
It means the world to me. Thankyou for taking the time to read my work. Ironically, I mention the piano a lot. I don’t really play, it’s a dream to learn though and I can envision playing…and I listen to a lot of piano when writing as well so it definitely influences my writing. I do sing though.
How lovely Gretchen … you might like First Love on my blog, just key it into the search and it should pop up … you’ll see why 🙂
rhythm of the rain…so lovely!
Classical music and rain in summer are made for each other!
a celebration of rain =)
The music of the rain brings peace and images of other worlds. Lovely. I think the image of the rain as a piano in your mind is great!
Very nice overall metaphor here. k.
Love your fingers on the rainy windowsill like a piano, Gretchen! I’ll have to check out that piece. Thanks, too, for following me blog.
hehe… not me blog, my blog… where’s my coffe?
Love the fingers dancing as though on a piano, lots of melody to be found in the rain.
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