This was written while listening to Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart’s Symphony No. 25. I encourage you to listen to this piece while reading this to experience the full intensity of this poem.
I stand atop the highest rock
Surrounded by nothing but
Open ocean and my thoughts
Breathing in deeply as
I see angry skies approaching-
Completely enchanted
I stand quite still-
Waiting.
I stand high on my toes
As the waves grow taller
And the swirling gusts of
Cool mist grow stronger
Dark smudged skies
Open and pour down on me
As I start swaying to
The quickening breeze
Imagining small schools
Of fishes waltzing below me
I tap my near frozen feet
To the beat of the thunder
And the storm’s heartbeat
Lost in a state of wonder
A sudden epiphany
Washes over me as
I begin waving my arms wildly
Hushing the roar of the waves
Taming the blasting winds mildly
To a softer melody as
To let the ocean sing
All the while directing
This elemental symphony
Written by: Gretchen Leary 2012
http://www.gretchenleary.com
beautiful
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smiles…another nice one…i would probably tighten up a few of the I’s honestly…like the i see angry eyes…and lose the begin’s as well to keep it from passivity….def like the piece though…smiles
You might like my Ivory at Midnight poem then. More descriptive >> https://gretchenleary.wordpress.com/2012/05/01/the-melody-of-my-being/