For about the millionth time,
I prayed again for a sign-
and found your street. (Literally)
However, it guided not you but me
and as a part of a journey,
Yet still- I was walking blindly.
The time on your dash was
the smoking gun,
A number that is emblazed in my faith-
under an already blazing sun.
That wise old laugh of yours
cracked the day’s seams-
Your cigarette smoke swirling
in the tempered heat,
Hanging heavy like a banner –
that reads “Welcome home. You’re free.”
These rusted shackles cracked //
as my vision cleared quickly
in a spark-lit epiphany
I realized I had chained myself
to a beautiful memory-
And so the longest chapter
has a rather ironic ending
& I guess you could say that
it gracefully finished
with a musical flourish
that in no way diminished
my years of naively wondering
but instead offered an answer
that my heart was begging.
& Just like that voice
from the Wild wild West, (she sang it well)
But we sang it best,
We sang it all- with no more whys-
As you covered the clock to say goodbye.
Very nice… Haven’t heard or seen post from you in awhile. I’ve posted RT for further responses. TC
Thank-you!! 🙂
Sing it all till in the end ~ A lovely journal about your journey Gretchen ~ Hope you are well as its been some time ~
Have a good week/end ~
Thank-you Grace!
This poem makes me curious about the backstory and that dashboard clock!!!
I’m glad it made you curious. I sort of took a bunch of fragments of a memory and pieced them together. It was 3:33PM and 3:34PM tends to be a significant number for me so he covered the clock. It’s a long story lol
Lovely poem. I really like the closing lines. Beautiful!
Thank-you so much 🙂
I really love thes journey of yours. Even though it ended with parting it seems to have brought a closure.. and I do love your comment on the numbers.
Thank you for sharing your journey, Gretchen. I particularly like the lines:
‘A number that is emblazed in my faith-
under an already blazing sun’
and
‘That wise old laugh of yours
cracked the day’s seams’.
This would make a great popular song. Lots of signs and clues to hang on to finding one’s way to the heart.
Well, time stopped for you. It is a good story. I don’t understand, but it makes us all curious for the rest of the story
It’s pretty cryptic haha. Unless you were there and then all these fragments would make you nod and laugh and maybe cry a little
Cryptic and curious. It asks more than it answers but in that lies it’s beauty.
I think I recognize things I might feel for someone or something now gone..a mixture of ups and downs with that person, but so dear and important in my growth, in good and bad ways. I may be way off but I love how you noted your journey is complete…and the rhythm is so nice to read.
Aww, thank-you and you’ve gotten most of that right 🙂