Like a black and white photo
so overly exposed,
my soul unfolds before you
not unlike a rose –
caught at just the right angle,
These high heels dangle and drop
and your doubtful words
stu//tter to – a – stop
Then… silence //
as they clatter to the floor-
Opening a trap door-
but it’s far too late to escape this dance,
I can only hide behind my ever tumbling hair
and delicate hands.
Your unending stare flatters
like an old fashioned romance,
But my broken pieces are like stars –
Their blinding light ricocheting
from my multitude of scars,
But you’ve surely seen enough,
My bewildered emerald eyes-
are the lantern to see all of my love,
Your metaphorical shutter moves and dances //
again and again
Capturing every single inch of me,
As my only armor begins to slip –
and falls like a sheet of black satin.
It takes courage to be vulnerable and exposed once more…specially like this line:
My bewildered emerald eyes-
are the lantern to see all of my love,
Yes Grace! It’s always nice to see you here! And thank-you. Vulnerability is an art for sure.
Hugely inspiring poem. I love this:
my broken pieces are like stars –
Their blinding light ricocheting
from my multitude of scars,
I relate.
Thank-you Victoria. I’ve missed the OLN at Dverse! I need to get back into the swing of doing all the prompts again. 🙂
Welcome home with a big virtual hug, Gretchen. I was happy to see you.
Ricocheting light to scars is an interesting thought, as they attract attention but will never be left alone.
I like the idea of the soul unfolding like a rose.
Hi Frank, thank-you! 🙂 It seemed like a good imagery to use for this. We all have many layers. An onion seemed less romantic lol
Sometimes I think scars it was makes us beautiful… at least I know the everyone have some, but few have the courage to show them… love how you describe it.
I love it! What beautiful images you portray as your walls come tumbling down!
Dwight